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Tuesday, January 13, 2009
Mars 3000 - Chapter 4
Karin waited about two minutes, and surprisingly, Billy ran out and saw Mars perched on top of the buildings. “Whoa!” he yelled. Billy fell back in the snow. “What happened!” cried Karin. Billy rubbed his eyes. “Well?” said Karin. “Whoa.” repeated Billy. “Big! Big Big Big!” Karin rolled her eyes. “I know!” she said “Only are you okay?” Billy got up and started to run to the street. I’ve got to stop that kid! About ten feet away, the older boy called for Billy. “Billy! Billy! Come over here!” But the older boy decided to follow Billy. “Look at me Robby!” cried Billy. Karin started to chase them both. In a flash, Billy was at the doorway of one of the buildings. Now Karin’s heart beat faster. She knew that the boys would get in trouble for running across the street by themselves, and Karin would be in even more trouble for going farther.
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Good job Evan - keep up the good work!!
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Evan, I'm really enjoying the story so far, and I'm really impressed with your writing skills!
ReplyDeleteLove and hugs,
Uncle Mike
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ReplyDeleteMike, whatever you said, please try to put it back. I'd love to see what you wrote.
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